Snoopy, you’re thinking about it too much. You’ll never get published at this rate. The right words are very important, but get the idea down on paper first. I think you’ll be much happier with the work you’ve done… if you’ve actually done some work.
As for last week’s post, nobody submitted. It seems that the characters just stare blankly at each other for all three panels. Their silence was somewhat expected, but a fun experiment.